Re: 1-21-10 NCW News Of Cyber Wars.
Posted: Thu, 27 Jan 2011 02:29:32 +0000[OSX] Dusty Snagsfield wrote:cmsjr123-Puppet Master wrote:
Read my neocw sig and what skip-it said about me. i liked it. Now as to my english. It is kind of hard to keep a consistent style if nothing is really going on CW. Yes somethings do happen. But what does happen isn't enough to write a good piece about each of them unless i seriously inflate them ( I could do that and i'm working on ways to do that) If i can get a good paragraphs out of them maybe around 3-4 each at least. Then i can Actually produce something good.
TO be honest in my eyes there is very little to work with besides what goes on in chat, and some little conflicts in the forums like this.
If I can't fill anything then what is the point in attempting to make it all glorious. I could go the in-design route and make a digital tabloid looking pdf download if you with for FORMAT. Format means nothing if you can't fill it( At least what I have been told).
A turbine will produce little thrust without the fan blades.(key part if you didn't know) -.-'
Even though I should re read this I'm not going to. Don't have the petty time like most people do but hey at least I'm trying.
You could still use good English and a consistent writing style. I'm not on about always using the same "parts" of CW for the news, I'm on about a writing style. A personality for the news. You know, like even though JK's writing got better throughout the HP books, the STYLE was still, in essence, the same. THAT is what it means. At the moment the style is.. well.. rubbish. If you made it have a more intelligent or friendly feel it'd be better. It's not a taxing task.
Wait I an use intelligent words. WOW. I was thinking that it being cw tha ti would have to dumb it down a whole lot to gibberish levels for most of the players :}